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Wuts up ya'll i'm still in math class right now and the teacher says i could stay on hear, so i might be on hear for a little bit longer because you know i like to talk sick. Throw bolagna on your breast because you know it makes me feel good and i like to talk sick. Go to sguizzel.com it's awesome.

Tay

My Teenage Life

          Have you ever wondered what its like to be a really cool guy and your having trouble with your grades while the school prom is only right aroung the corner? Well if you listen closely to this story I am about to write of my life than you would surely know what I am talking about. Here I am,about to make the play at practice when this girl that I have always liked(who by the way was my first crush)takes a glance at me and then she smiles...I see her beautiful smile filled with bright white teeth which are covered with a thin layer bright whiteness from which full of love and sweetness. All through my life, I had thought that she never even knew that me and her had met on a second grade field trip...this girls name was Ashly Shroeder. Then out of the blue I was struck from her bright shine of beautifulness, but it was the red teams linebacker that tackled me on three. I saw everybody running to see if I was okay from the hard shocking tackle. Then everything started to go blurry and then it went white. When I woke up I could see the fainting numbers of an alarm clock , but I just couldn't make the letters out, I heard some kind of creak or  murmer. Somebody had seen me awake and told everybody:

          "Look, he's awake, come and see."

          It was all blurry, I could faintly remember what  happened before I had awoke from the tackle. I could barely see, but I made out that there were about, I don't know, maybe tons of people just right it front of my face, can I please have some space here. I turned my head to were it was facing when I had awoken from the concusion, the side bed clock that I fainty read had said that it was 1:02 p.m. I was amazed, I had been asleep for at least 8 hours. Once I fully awoke from my cat nap(I wish it was a cat nap) I saw that I was in a small hospital room with a T.V. hooked up to the wall, and a small loveseat with two people sitting on it watching me closely. I looked everywhere and I couldn't she Ashly anywhere. I would think that after what happened to me at football practice that she would be nice enough to me and come supporrt me for what happened. When I was tackled at practice, I never saw where Ashly had gone before I went blank. All that had happened so far made me realize that maybe Ashly wasn't as good as a person that I thought. Then something happened. Ashly came in the room with 4 boxes of Pizza Hut pizzas and two bags of breadsticks and sause. I guess everyone was so uptight about me getting knocked unconscience, that they never realized that they had skipped their dinner.

          "Honey, are you okay?" my mother had said.

          "I...I...I feel great, thanks for asking-"

          And as soon as I could think about how my mother felt when she knew that I was okay after all....Ashly darted across the small hospitl room like she had to wake up in the morning to get to her finals in time.

          "Hey, Ashly, where are going?"I said.

          "I'm going out to the car to get the rest of the pizzas!"she said. She made it sound like I was stupid or something.

          "That's all the pizzas that we had ordered!" my mom said in astonishment

          "I.....I.....I ordered some more with my own money!" she hesitated

          "Oh, okay, well hurry up, we have somebody to company!" my mother said seriously

          I had some pizza and some breadsticks for a late night snack. When I was done, I sat there for a few minutes and wondered why Ashly had never come back from picking up the extra pizzas supposedly payed by her own money from her car. Right then I knew that I was right about her not really caring for me, that she never cared when I went over to her house everynight to hang out with her brother, but the real reason was because she lived there. But some how I just never understood why she never realised why I was always looking at her like Romeo looked at Juliet when he first met her.

          I remembered that the Senior Prom was just around the corner and that I had never worked up the guts just to walk up to Ashly and ask her to the Prom like a real man would. Then I thought to myself Maybe I should ask Ashly to the Prom, or maybe I should just ask one of my best friends or someone to go with just to talk with and go as friends. This was a Prom where everybody had to go with someone, and I didn't want to get stuck with a girl thats really unpopular and thinks that it doesn't matter who you go with, Well I got news for you babes, I at least want to go with someone I know a little about! I thought. So I realized that I knew this very beautiful smart and funny girl by the name of Ally Linda. This girl was almost like a young aged hot super model or she even looked like she could be a Playboy Playmate. I had her in one of my classes I just can't think of it right now......wait! 7th period, thats right I have her in my 7th period class room. To me, I thought that this was great because it was 7th hour and that was the last hour at the end of the day. This is good because I could ask her to the Prom before any other guy gets to her and I would get this over with so I wouldn't have to do it later on and get really nervous over that time period.

          I arrived to seventh hour to see Ally sitting at her desk with no other guys around her, she looked up and saw me! I was shocked already and I hadn't even stepped another foot towards her. I knew that I had started to blush, and then she started to giggle and got back to doing her work. I walked slowly over to her desk and asked her if I could ask her a guestion and I said that it was very important.

          "Uh huh" she said in a very nice voice

          "Well, I was wondering....well....uh-"

          "Yes...he he he" she giggled in a friendly way

          "Well I was wondering if you had anybody to go with to the Prom?" I said this very quickly.

          " No I don't, but I would e delighted to go with you" she said

          After that I started to blush even more and then my nerves went away, and I started to smile because I was glad that fhe wanted go with me to the Prom. Finally I had gotten this over with.

          " Well thats great, I'll make all the arrangments for Prom Night"

          This happened on the day of the 20th of January sadly to say this is the end of part one of my romance story I'll let you when I 'm done with the second part of the story when I make some move on Ally at the dance.

          that was so sad!

          Tay

Part 2                                                                                                                

My Teenage Life

Now back to the moment right after I had asked Ally to the dance.

          "Alright, well I'll call you tonight and then we can make some plans for the Prom" I said

          Before I knew it , I walked to my desk to get my notes for class out-

          "Hey, I never gave you my number!" she said

          "Oh, that's all right, I don't need it." I said terebly

          "Yeah, you do, aren't you going to call me tonight to make some plans for the Prom?" she said

          "Oh, yeah that's right, sorry!" I hesitated

          Then on my hand, she wrote:

                                                   859-2406

                                                      Ally L.

                                                      heart's

                                                         U

          "Well, I guess I'll call you tonight!" I said, then started to walk back to my desk.

          "Hey, you wanna sit by me from now on, I'll save you a seat!" she said very nicely.

          "Sure...alright" I said while blushing at the same time.

          This was the best thing that ever happened to me that day. It was also the worst thing that happened. Because I knew that Allyhad had a boyfriend and that he could be scary sometimes. I...I mean I'm not saying that I'm scared of him or anything...I am a man, the captain and quarterback of the Shawnee Mission West Vikings, You don't think I'm scared, do you? About her boyfriend now, I thought she was crazy when she said she had nobody to go with to the Prom.I mean, what kind of guy wouldn't want to take a girl like Ally to the Prom, Especially her boyfriend David the linbacker, you know who I'm talking about, the guy who tackled me at practice. Basically, David was the guy who got me into all this.

          Then all of a sudden, David comes walking in to the room, I had just remembered that he was also in one of my classes, He gave me the worst look a guy could get when he's with another guy's girl. He looked like he was going to kill me.

          "What are you doing sitting next to my girlfriend, she my girlfriend?" he said.

          "Sorry, I'll find seat to sit in" I said in a low tone a voice so noone could here me.

          "No, you stay here, I need to talk to David about how he's been treating me lately!" she said screaming a cry.

          "David, you've been treating me like shit lately, yeah I said it, LIKE SHIT. Taylor asked me to the Prom." she screamed at him.

          "What?!" David howelled

          "Yeah, and do you know what I said to that?!"

          "Your my girlfriend, you would say no!" he screamed.

          "Well you wanna know what I really said?"

          "Yes!'

          "I told Taylor that I had nobody to go to the Prom with, and then told him that I would be delighted to go with him!"

          "You heard me!"

          "Your my girlfriend, your suppose to go to the Prom with me..."

          Well , I guess I'm not your little candycane anymore!" she screamed

          Then something bad happened...

          David hit Ally, and then she fell back, a fellow guy caught her and put her down nicely.

          "What in the hell is the matter with you!?" I yelled

          Then before I knew it. I punched David right in the side of his face. Right on his left cheek. Then he took a pencil and tried to slash me, then he got me about 5 times on the back of my right hand, once on the back od my left hand, once on the bottom of my left forearm, and then one long scratch on the bottom of my right forearm. Then we both got in a huge fight. Both of us took turns swatting at each other, then I gave him one huge uppercut. Then both of us ennded up in the Principal's office.

          I got lucky that day because he was the only one of us who was banned from going to the Prom. He was the one who was banned because he striked me with the pencil.

          That night, I called Ally and she was crying because she thought that one of us would get severly hurt. So then we made some plans for Prom night.

          Now that's the end of part 2 of my story tell me if you want me to type part three, so you can see me makes some moves on Ally.

          Tay

My Teenage Life

          Have you ever wondered what its like to be a really cool guy and your having trouble with your grades while the school prom is only right aroung the corner? Well if you listen closely to this story I am about to write of my life than you would surely know what I am talking about. Here I am,about to make the play at practice when this girl that I have always liked(who by the way was my first crush)takes a glance at me and then she smiles...I see her beautiful smile filled with bright white teeth which are covered with a thin layer bright whiteness from which full of love and sweetness. All through my life, I had thought that she never even knew that me and her had met on a second grade field trip...this girls name was Ashly Shroeder. Then out of the blue I was struck from her bright shine of beautifulness, but it was the red teams linebacker that tackled me on three. I saw everybody running to see if I was okay from the hard shocking tackle. Then everything started to go blurry and then it went white. When I woke up I could see the fainting numbers of an alarm clock , but I just couldn't make the letters out, I heard some kind of creak or  murmer. Somebody had seen me awake and told everybody:

          "Look, he's awake, come and see."

          It was all blurry, I could faintly remember what  happened before I had awoke from the tackle. I could barely see, but I made out that there were about, I don't know, maybe tons of people just right it front of my face, can I please have some space here. I turned my head to were it was facing when I had awoken from the concusion, the side bed clock that I fainty read had said that it was 1:02 p.m. I was amazed, I had been asleep for at least 8 hours. Once I fully awoke from my cat nap(I wish it was a cat nap) I saw that I was in a small hospital room with a T.V. hooked up to the wall, and a small loveseat with two people sitting on it watching me closely. I looked everywhere and I couldn't she Ashly anywhere. I would think that after what happened to me at football practice that she would be nice enough to me and come supporrt me for what happened. When I was tackled at practice, I never saw where Ashly had gone before I went blank. All that had happened so far made me realize that maybe Ashly wasn't as good as a person that I thought. Then something happened. Ashly came in the room with 4 boxes of Pizza Hut pizzas and two bags of breadsticks and sause. I guess everyone was so uptight about me getting knocked unconscience, that they never realized that they had skipped their dinner.

          "Honey, are you okay?" my mother had said.

          "I...I...I feel great, thanks for asking-"

          And as soon as I could think about how my mother felt when she knew that I was okay after all....Ashly darted across the small hospitl room like she had to wake up in the morning to get to her finals in time.

          "Hey, Ashly, where are going?"I said.

          "I'm going out to the car to get the rest of the pizzas!"she said. She made it sound like I was stupid or something.

          "That's all the pizzas that we had ordered!" my mom said in astonishment

          "I.....I.....I ordered some more with my own money!" she hesitated

          "Oh, okay, well hurry up, we have somebody to company!" my mother said seriously

          I had some pizza and some breadsticks for a late night snack. When I was done, I sat there for a few minutes and wondered why Ashly had never come back from picking up the extra pizzas supposedly payed by her own money from her car. Right then I knew that I was right about her not really caring for me, that she never cared when I went over to her house everynight to hang out with her brother, but the real reason was because she lived there. But some how I just never understood why she never realised why I was always looking at her like Romeo looked at Juliet when he first met her.

          I remembered that the Senior Prom was just around the corner and that I had never worked up the guts just to walk up to Ashly and ask her to the Prom like a real man would. Then I thought to myself Maybe I should ask Ashly to the Prom, or maybe I should just ask one of my best friends or someone to go with just to talk with and go as friends. This was a Prom where everybody had to go with someone, and I didn't want to get stuck with a girl thats really unpopular and thinks that it doesn't matter who you go with, Well I got news for you babes, I at least want to go with someone I know a little about! I thought. So I realized that I knew this very beautiful smart and funny girl by the name of Ally Linda. This girl was almost like a young aged hot super model or she even looked like she could be a Playboy Playmate. I had her in one of my classes I just can't think of it right now......wait! 7th period, thats right I have her in my 7th period class room. To me, I thought that this was great because it was 7th hour and that was the last hour at the end of the day. This is good because I could ask her to the Prom before any other guy gets to her and I would get this over with so I wouldn't have to do it later on and get really nervous over that time period.

          I arrived to seventh hour to see Ally sitting at her desk with no other guys around her, she looked up and saw me! I was shocked already and I hadn't even stepped another foot towards her. I knew that I had started to blush, and then she started to giggle and got back to doing her work. I walked slowly over to her desk and asked her if I could ask her a guestion and I said that it was very important.

          "Uh huh" she said in a very nice voice

          "Well, I was wondering....well....uh-"

          "Yes...he he he" she giggled in a friendly way

          "Well I was wondering if you had anybody to go with to the Prom?" I said this very quickly.

          " No I don't, but I would e delighted to go with you" she said

          After that I started to blush even more and then my nerves went away, and I started to smile because I was glad that fhe wanted go with me to the Prom. Finally I had gotten this over with.

          " Well thats great, I'll make all the arrangments for Prom Night"

          This happened on the day of the 20th of January sadly to say this is the end of part one of my romance story I'll let you when I 'm done with the second part of the story when I make some move on Ally at the dance.

          Tay